Revision 1

     For my first revision, I went back to my Publisher design.  I also included the new pictures from my my recent photo shoot.  On my midterm submission, many of the pictures I used were taken during a rehearsal for West Side Story and the kids were not in costume.  The pictures I used now was with the kids in costume to make my magazine look more professional and appealing.  I like the Publisher design better than the InDesign design.  I still think I need to clean up on the titles in the cover and structure the article better.  I did make some changes on my article to make it flow better as well.  This is the start of some new changes I am making on my submission and I think it will end up looking very nice.